Chapter1

Catherine looked into the fire. Her eyes reflected the fires glow. She turned her head to look at her brother fast asleep. She noticed his mechanical parts. Then she remembered how he had gotten this way.

Her and her brother were in a clearing I'm not quite sure what you mean here... you might wanna google that word in the forest that surrounded their house. They were battling off a robot that had come out of nowhere and had started to attack them. It should be had started, as both happened before they were battling (I think), but I don't really like the sentence anymore when there is 2x "had" on such short distances from each other It had already covered her brother in a weird electric wed and was overtaking (one word, no c) him. Catherine thought fast and pulled her whip over and around the robots lag. What is a lag? Instead of falling backward, it fell right on top of her brother. The electric field around him fused some of the robots parts on to him.

Catherine was strayed from her thoughts by the call of her name. She looked over her shoulder to see that her brother had woken up.
“Good morning Tecno. Did you have a good sleep?” she asked.
“Mmmm, well. Though I’d rather be up then asleep.” he replied.
Catherine rolled her eyes at him and went back to putting more wood in the stove. Even though there was electricity in the land, they didn’t get it becuase they were to far in the woods to get it. Though they had light thanks to Tecno. Her brother always like to play with mechanical bevies. what are bevies? The only definition I find says "group" (of animals) She really didn’t care as long as he didn’t come around her with a wire. She watched him turn around the room and go back to his project he had been working on before she had pought I don't know that word either, sorry him to sleep. Catherine knew he had to have a routine or he would just stand there. She had found him standing there one day for no good reason and did not like it. After that she had tried to keep him busy with work and projects.
She got up and wacked (= crazy, stoned... ehm, do you wanna say that?) over to the table where her brother sat and watched him make something she didn’t know. A knock came from the door that drew both their attentions ... I don't know, but it could be that this saying is only with attention written singular Not too sure though.... Catherine got up and walked to the door. As soon as she opened it a round of gun fire came out and upon them. They both took cover as the intruders came in still firing. To Catherine’s surprise the intruders were the same robots they had fought before. She got up and tried to defend herself, but she was hit by something unseen and knocked back. Last thing she remembered was some guy coming in and overtaking her brother. Then all went black.

When she woke up, Catherine was alone and the house was in ruens. She got up and looked around . Her body was stiff and sore. She noticed her brothers gun lying on the floor. She picked it up and looked it over.
“I promise I will get this back to you.” she declared as she placed the gun in her bag.
She witched her form into that of a black panther. She walked outside and then into the forest. Her avenger (though I think the right word here would be "revenge" had just begon.



Chapter 2

Thornon was sitting at the bar (do you mean bar? Or do you mean to say he's bare, like has no clothes on?), looking at nothing in particular. At this time of season there were mostly werewolves, vampiers, dog and wolf demons. Though his kind (dragon demons) were not much payed attention to, he could not help feeling odd. The sound of the ? bar door ? took him from his thoughts as he looked up to see a cat demon enter. She was getting weird looks and no wonder why. Cat demons were not usually seen in this part of town anymore. As she headed to the bar she got a few snares (or do you mean stares?) from people she past. She sat down at the corner near to him. He quickly got up and took a place behind her so a fight would not start out.

“Are you nuts?” he asked
the demon looked up and just looked at him like she didn’t know what he was talking about.
“Come on. Don’t you know not to come here?” he tried agan
“No, why should I not?” she asked
“Because you’ll get shredded!” he said
“Ooooo, I’m new thats why. I thought I’d find someone in here to help me. But it dosen’t look like it” she said
“what do you need help with?” Thoron asked
“My brother was taken by some guy with robots and I need help tracking him down” she quicly told him her story.
“Mmm, seems like you're in a sticky situation. But I think I can help. I’ve been tracking the same guy. He’s been causing a lot of trouble lately. If you want, you could join me.” as he finished he thought he saw a flicker of hope in her eyes.
“That would be great.” she answered
“Fine. Now whats your name? Mine is thornon.” he asked
“Catherine. But you can call me cat” Catherine answered
Thornon looked behind him and noticed that there were glares form severy people. Thornon got up and becond to Cat to do the same.
“ We had beter leave befor a fight brakes out” he said as he starts to walk to the exit. Cat was on his heels

As Cat followed Thornon a thought came into her mind. She had seen him before, but could not imagine were. It didn’t mater now, what matered was that she had a good start to finding her brother.
Thornon took her to a house not far from the bar. As she entered, she noticed that the house was like her own. There was a small kitchen that was in the same room as the living room. Three doors were on the other side of the house and facing the entrance. It was a small and cosy place. Cat fell almost at home here. Thornon past her and posed in the living room.
“Umm, make your self at home. The middle door is the washroom (don't you mean bathroom?) and that door is the spare room.” he pointed to the door next to the outside door “you can make yourself at home, just don’t go into my room. Got it?”
Cat nodded her head in acknoledgment. Thornon turned and walked into the far room. Cat stood there for a minute and looked around. Then she crossed the room to where she would be staying. Once inside, she looked around. It was a small room. One window at the other side of the room was covered with thick blinds. Beside the window was a night that had a lap (what's that? Don't you mean a lamp?) and clock on it, beside the bed. The bed had a nice checherd no idea what that is...) blanket on it. A light pillow acompined the blancet to. There was a dresser on the other side of the room with a mirror on it. Cat went over to it and opened the drawers. There was nothing inside. Then an idea came into her head. When she had come to this town, she had hidden her bags of stuff she’d needed in the woods. Now was a good time to go and get them.
Cat walked out of her room and over to Thornon’s room. She knocked on the door, but no one answered. So she went to the small kitchen and found a pice of paper and pencil. She wrote him a note.


Thornon
I went to go get my stuff and bring it back to the
house. I’ll be a few minutes.
Cat


She left the note on the counter where Thornon could find it. Then she left the house and walked to the woods.
When she got back, she found Thornon sitting on the chouch watching T.V. Thornon looked up at Cat as soon as she came back through the door. She walked to her room to put her stuff in the room. She noticed that Thornon had followed her.
“Whats the mater?”
“Nothing. Just please don’t do that again.” he said over his shoulder as he walked back to the T.V. Cat stared after him with what looked like a scowl (?) on her face.
You’d think he has feelings for me. She thought as she unpacked her belongings.

As the day preveiled, nothing unusual happened.